OWNED Written by Sam Featherstone & Wesley Tippetts
Based on: Wesleys Real Life
Experience
341N
400E Provo, UT 84601 801-809-6548
Draft 2 Jan 21, 2013
INT. JEFF’S HOUSE - DAY
Jeff, a kid in his mid twenties whose voice
and appearanceepitomizes the world of online gaming, stands to the right ofhis
TV gloating at his heavily decorated trophy shelf.
His golden reflection stares back at him in the
polishedsurface of a large trophy. Engraved are the words “WORLD * CHAMPION.”
At
the end of the line of trophies is a family photo of Jeff, * his two siblings,
and his parents GERTIE(47) and GARY(50). *
Jeff
wedges the trophy into the space occupied by the photo, * his eyes locked on
it. The picture, forced to the edge of the * shelf, teeters a long moment
before it falls to the ground * with a GLASS SHATTERING CRUNCH. Jeff doesn’t
notice. *
Jeff’s
phone sits on the coffee table behind him. After * several VIBRATIONS Jeff
finally notices and waddles over to * the table. The caller ID reads “PARENTAL
UNIT 1.” *
JEFF Speak.
GARY Hello Jeff,
it’s your father calling. I wanted to check up and
see how you have been?
Jeff
wedges the phone into his double chin.
JEFF Eh.
GARY
Well we haven’t seen you for quite some time, and we never heard back from you
about the family gettogether today.
Jeff
leans down laboring to pick up his control. *
JEFF Yeah? *
GARY Anyway, we
were hoping to see youthere. But if you’re busy...
Jeff chooses his favorite fighter CALIBER who is riddled with *
heavy artillery.
JEFF
Sorry Dad, I gotta go.
Jeff
tosses the phone to the side. On the screen pops up * “SEARCHING FOR OPPONENT.”
JEFF
(CONT’D)Who’s ready to get owned.
INT. TOMMY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS * The TV reads
“OPPONENT FOUND.” *
Tommy(6),
a young boy with an innocent face, stares wide-eyedat the TV screen choosing
his character, GARJIN. *
MOM (O.S.) *
Tommy! Are you watching yoursister?
TOMMY
YEEEEEESSSSSSSS MOM!
Tommy
reaches off screen and pulls ABBY(baby) into frame by * her butt. She sits up
holding her cyclops stuffed creature. *
It’s
as if nothing else in the room exists besides the TV.
The
two fighters face each other as the game announces * “FIGHTERS GET READY!” The
countdown begins. BEGIN MONTAGE * “3” Jeff cracks his fingers. “2” Abby
rasberrys at the screen. Tommy’s annoyed. “1” Jeff squints intimidatingly at
the screen. *
INT.
GAME WORLD - CONTINUOUS
The words “FIGHT” fill the screen. Tommy’s
character Garjin jumps up and down punching at the air while Jeff’s
characterCaliber stands idly by. Garjin looks quite pathetic.
INT.
TOMMY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Tommy mashes buttons with tongue out in Michael Jordan * fashion,
bouncing Garjin getting closer on every jump. *
INT. GAME WORLD - CONTINUOUS
Garjin is finally within hitting range but Caliber
remains indefault block mode.
INT. JEFF’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Jeff stares at the screen with a face that shows his
destain.
JEFF What a nube.
Jeff’s
hands jump into crazy action as he whips his joy stickaround and coordinately
dances his fingers across the buttonsin perfectly timed and perfectly executed
moves.
INT.
GAME WORLD - CONTINUOUS
Caliber does
some crazy awesome 50 hit quadruple combinationthat leaves Garjin within an
inch of his life.
Garjin
stands dazed as the game announces “FINISH HIM!”
INT.
JEFF’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Jeff stands
dramatically above his controller, and while onehand looms ready to slam, the
other swirls the joy stick.
JEFF
(timed to his joystickmovements)You - just - got...
He slams his hands down onto the controller
and Caliber obliterates Garjin with the blinding heat of a “Samus-like”laser.
Jeff, raises his
hands high above his head, reveals hisjiggling underbelly, and declares.
JEFF
(CONT’D) OWNED!
INT.
TOMMY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Tommy
stares at the screen as tears well up in his eyes. BabyAbby giggles. Tommy
begins to bawl. He darts out of the room.
Abby stares in the direction of her
brother until the gameasks, “PLAY AGAIN?”
*
*
*
* *
Abby looks at the paddle and hits it with her chubby little *
hand accepting yes to the fight. *
INT. JEFF’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Jeff,
gulping down an energy drink, notices the rematchrequest. The game counts down
from “3, 2, 1.”
JEFF Ah! Up for more punishment are we?
“FIGHT!”
INT.
TOMMY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Baby Abby hits the paddle as if it were a
bongo drumlaughing, smiling, and cooing.
INT.
GAME WORLD - CONTINUOUS
Garjin springs into action sending a flurry
of craziness inCaliber’s direction. It’s more than he can handle.
INT.
JEFF’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Jeff
spits up his drink shocked at the dramatic change inevents (if effects can
handle it). With that perfectprecision we saw earlier, Jeff sends a mass of
counterattacks in Garjin’s direction. *
INT.
TOMMY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Baby
Abby is gnawing on the paddle as Garjin deflects it all. *
INT.
JEFF’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Jeff
sweats bullets in panicked disbelif face against the TV. *
INT.
TOMMY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Abby
is slapping the paddle with her feet now. *
INT.
GAME WORLD - CONTINUOUS
Garjin does a massive 50 hit combo on Caliber putting
himinto the death daze. The game shouts “FINISH HIM.”
INT.
JEFF’S HOUSE - DAY
Jeff,
cowers in the fetal position awaiting his “death,” but * Garjin simply holds
the fight stance. Jeff’s confused. *
INT.
TOMMY’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Abby
drools on the control tired from the game’s excitement. * Mom enters, picks
Abby up, and turns off the game. *
INT.
JEFF’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Jeff,
still in the fetal position, looks up when the screenannounces “PLAYER 2
FORFEITS, PLAYER 1 WINS!” Perplexed, and with great effort, Jeff hoists himself
onto the table. Jeff * tries to make sense of it all as something catches his
eye. *
He
looks down to find the broken picture frame. Shards of * glass fall to the
ground as he retrieves it. He examines itclosely with a face of concerned
remorse.
Finally, as he looks up to face the taunting
game console,his expression is replaced by heroic determination. He ishaving
his Alma the Younger moment.
He
stretches forth his finger pointed directly at the console’s
on/off button. It looks as awkward and long as E.T.’s finger as he advances
toward the TV. Jeff clutches thebroken frame in his open hand as his source of
motivation.The console seems to be a mile away but Jeff will not bestopped.
Every step is a milestone. *
After
an eternity he is finally there. He stares down the * green button one last
time, grits his teeth, and presses itdown. He holds it a moment, releases, and
exhales. *
The
game shuts down and Jeff places the broken frame on topof the console. He takes
a small step back and smiles. *
Without a second thought Jeff turns, grabs his keys
off theend table, and rushes through frame. We end with the sunlightglowing
warmly on his family photo.
JEFF
Owned.
THE END
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