I actually think that Alyssa's version is much more lively. This one feels eerie like it's looking at me like a snack. She needs the saturation. It'll help her feel more like the protagonist and hero--unless that's not what you're going for . . .
I actually think that Alyssa's version is much more lively. This one feels eerie like it's looking at me like a snack. She needs the saturation. It'll help her feel more like the protagonist and hero--unless that's not what you're going for . . .
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